I'm not going to rate this because the story might actually be good, but it was taking for damn near ever to get to anything even remotely interesting. Linc, the hero I guess, sat there for at least 5 pages ruminating over his entire family history and I gave up because it looked like it was going to go on even longer. And that was just chapter one... After 15 paragraphs explaining why this character will never allow himself to love, move the fuck on already!